Saturday, April 17, 2010


napowrimo#17 prompt using something elemental....FIRE
.....this is a draft..


in the morning mist
hearing a gasping scream
a hurting sound of passion
beyond the edge of my mind
surprised to find
the shout was coming from me
a fire in my heart
I meditate

the raw physical energy from the universe
the glow of the embers
the heat from the sun
lightning crackling in the clouds
the molten lava of the volcanos
feeding my body with fire
calling to my mind
I meditate

ignited by some bliss
sheltered in a blazing flame
the fire roams inside me
cell by cell towards my mind
searching for inner peace
of honey, sweetness and quiet
with heart on fire
I meditate


flaubert said...

Nice way of describing meditating and using the prompt about elements. Cool Wayne. Nice weekend to you too.

rallentanda said...

You have a gorgeous mountain hideaway to meditate in. It's sunday afternoon here and I'm off to meditate in the cool water at the cove.
Have a good weekend

Francis Scudellari said...

I like the contrast of the fire's violence and the meditative peace.

Systematic Weasel said...

Nicely done! I enjoyed reading this! Thanks for sharing.