Wednesday, April 7, 2010

BEAUTIFUL NUN

napowrimo#7...a tanka about humor of love...or something



BEAUTIFUL NUN

shaved head
falling out of her robe
walking towards me
naked exceptionally beautiful
who doesn't desire me

17 comments:

Linda Jacobs said...

This is a riot!

Anonymous said...

I agree!

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robkistner said...

Wayne, I think you've just awakened a very secret fantasy I've suppressed since the sixth grade of my Catholic school upbringing -- sister Regina, oh my...
...rob
Image & Verse

robkistner said...

And, oh yeah, one more thing -- I love your house... :-)

...rob

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Crumbs, I too have dreams like that, sometimes!

Wayne Pitchko said...

thanks Rob...and I never went to a Catholic school...fantasies?? wsell thats another thing

rallentanda said...

Ah..so Wayne!

Anonymous said...

Interesting... ~ and I really do mean that in a good way!

your own tanka koan?

Anonymous said...

Ha! ha! good one! hey Wayne.. hope all is well.

Red Shoe Artist said...

Ha... cute!

Anonymous said...

they always scared me...fearfully frightening... it must be a man thing... and that foto no 6... i can feel the breeze and smell the wind... beautiful erotic engine

Irene said...

Good one. *smiles*

Richelle Dodaro said...

Great job with this prompt! Very funny

flaubert said...

Wayne,
I love this! It is so perfectly funny!
Pamela

Katharine Whitcomb said...

quite a moment!

Robin said...

Clever!!!!

Anonymous said...

Okay, I see how this is/could be funny, but there is also something sacred and beautiful about it...Or, is it just me?
Anyway, nice job, Wayne.

Christina :)