Monday, April 13, 2009

Dancing In The Pool

we sat outside the hotel room
watching the two dance in the pool
thrilled at their movements
in awe of their absolute singularity

the midget like the changeling in the fairytale
and the tall green mermaid showed a vivid contrast
to bring an acute balance as they danced
jubilant never to impugn each others movement

the prompt was using these words 10 words
acute, green, bring, room, pool, changeling, singularity, jubilant, impugn, hotel


Anonymous said...

You've done a great job with the words to produce a quirky scenario.

Erin Davis said...

Wow! What a picture you painted with those words!

Elizabeth said...

Creative use of the words. Wonderful images.

SweetTalkingGuy said...

Hi Wayne, nicely written and good use of the prompt words - where did the prompt come from?

Gavin said...

Very nice. Love the midget like the changeling in the fairytale..a David Lynch like image.

Anonymous said...

impressive...good job on using the words from the prompt...

btw, thanks for reminding me how stubborn i am.. appreciate haha

Anonymous said...

What an image! And using all the words too. Well done.