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napowrimo#8...about lovers
LOVERS NEVER GET OLD
older
no focus
no mission
staring at each other
forgetting ourselves
who we are
who we were
unable to get off our chair
tears running down our cheeks
our inner being
never to be concealed
still in love
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Aww you're such an ole rumba champ softie
Wayne! So you seduced that beautiful nun
after all?
You deserve a stint in the Guevara Guerilla
Light orchestra for that!
Very sweet poem :)
Marinela x
Love the title. Captures the feeling.
I hope it applies to us all.
Just how it should be...
Hi Wayne,
Knew you were a big softee all along!
Wayne,
This is captivating! Wonderful! And I love the pic of your partner. She is beautiful!
Pamela
Nice tribute to longevity of love.
Painful poem, but very good, sweet.
I read this poem three times -- I think it could be either a sad poem or a peaceful poem, a poem of regret or a poem of acceptance. A poem that "stares" at both what's gained and lost when aging. Nice work!
Tender touch. =)
Nicely done!
Therese...for me..it was more acceptance
Holy sweetness!! I can feel this one.
This is lovely.
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Ummm....REALLY nice! Lots going on in here. I love the frankness, honestly, absence of romanticism. "Unable to get off our chair, tears running down our cheeks"...powerful stuff!
You handled the subject with a lot more grace than I. Lovely.
thanks everyone...I have learned so much about this stuff from my partner/lover...and still learning
she is beautiful...... takes a lifetime and then some.... repairable repartee
Kool! The title says it all!
Lovers need never get old- but love needs to be nurtured and coddled and invested in! Then the rewards can be incredible! Thanks for this concept!
Well I hope that I will get to that point of "never to be concealed" much sooner than older!
I really like how you started out your poem, really established a strong pov in such few words.
This was touching. Well done.
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