the palms sway in the breeze
above the saffron pavement
all i can see beyond him is
the azure ripples
of the caribbean sea
the havana coastline retreats like a hem
from the patches of seaweed
i saw at first glance
jesus lying on the edge
of the seawall last nite
his latin shadow spilled across the ocean
and over the kids fishing on the rocks
below her bedroom window
covered in the cobwebs of the breeze
we slapped at the flies
as the havana tenements collapsed
enclosed in turqouise
he slept
the words i used from the 50 word salad.... patches..seaweed..slapped ..bedroom.. turquoise
3 comments:
This is so alive with images! And I love the word "saffron"!
LOL Linda liked the same word I did. I couldn't believe you used it as an adjective for pavement. BRILLIANT move on your part!
Overall the whole thing is riddled with breathtaking images. A GREAT job!
Thanks for reading mine :o).
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