growing peacefully
rain drops on the fern's shoulders
wetness of July
soil gets ready for more growth
before leaving with winter
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About Me
- Wayne Pitchko
- Golden, British Columbia, Canada
- POET/PAINTER..I'm retired social worker..live in the Canadian Rockies with my partner Vreni. have two daughters and six grandchildren.....
5 comments:
NICE....got a little rain last night...was a nice cut in the heat...my version would be:
brown & brittle,
the tender rain
snapped the dry branches
off at the base
I like the last line especially: "before leaving with winter."
Just a day or two after the solstice a relative reminded me that the days were once again getting shorter...
I enjoyed your tanka mine is here:
http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/07/wwp-112-tanka-july-4.html
Dear Wayne: A very creative way with words, and the flow is perfect. Loves how this mystic's inner journey dreams of Persia. Does conjure many images; thank-you~!!!
Some very descriptive phrases here, but to lose the imagination of death - it doesn’t bear thinking about!
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