Saturday, May 28, 2011
IRRESISTIBLE
......using the image by German surrealist Michael Maier as a prompt
at intermission we met on the shore
storm clouds churning with blue
broken by the roar of silence
without notes glowing in the sky
thoughts of emptiness deep in my soul
in time with my suffocating cello suite
choking on the music of Bach
in time with her mute lips
with denial playing my strings
treading gently before the onslaught
ignoring the incoming tide
I skipped stones across the sea
our eyes never met just wept
as her wing blew to my bow
washing and slicing my strings
squeezing down to my highest pitch
at last she glances at my bow
her face shining with suspicion
shrugging off the imbalance
we make music on the shore
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10 comments:
lovely
i like the tension of disconnection =)
It's brilliant... 'the roar of silence' among others. You have that special knack with words.
This took us into not obvious waters. I found it a bit special.
Beautifully done.
Wayne, you did the image justice, nice one.
cheers,
Pamela
Making music on the shore - how lovely.
deep and beautiful.
Very very good..
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Haven't been here for a while but just love your poetic writing style. The words work magically with the painting!
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