using some of the words from the wordle (in red)
DALAI LAMA AT CITY LIGHTS
a summer night in North Beach
where street cars dance to the beat
of jazz notes blown
sitting at a table at City Lights
with Kerouac and other misfits
drinking towards another stream of consciousness
baked on silk pie and pineapple wine
approaching silence with reckless abandon
reading dry salvages with blemished views
puzzled by his deep shadow of silence
confident moments of his nothingness
and relentless expression of beauty
wondering what brought him to this place
we listen to the poetry of his smile
in our rowdy silence
17 comments:
All of your descriptive images build to those final two lines. And they are beautitul. Wonderful take on the prompt, Wayne.
Elizabeth
One of your best Wayne..captures a wonderful synchronicity of scene, feeling, philosophy..
I liked this poem with the images and where you went with it from the prompt. :)
Wayne, this sounds like a glorious time..sitting with Kerouac! You've captured the mood in this poem!
Wayne you have certainly set the mood perfectly in this piece!
Have a great weekend
Cheers
Pam
Great piece, Wayne! The ending line seals it. Bravo, you beat poet dude. Rock on!
~Brenda
Like this one very much, Wayne. Even though I'm not familiar with Kerouac's world, you create a vivid image. Those last two lines are great.
'poetry of his smile' is nice!
Like the idea of street cars dancing to jazz. Evocative scene!
Silk pie and pineapple wine! Yum!
As always, a great evocation here, Wayne! Love how you incorporate Kerouac, HH the DL, words from Eliot, etc. Very richly textured.
"with Kerouac and other misfits
drinking towards another stream of consciousness"
I loved it!
dances of the zeroes
Wonderfully descriptive! Excellent take on the prompt!
-Weasel =)
love, love, love the last two lines... along with:
confident moments of his nothingness
and relentless expression of beauty
well, and just the poem as a whole - the contrast between worlds - thank you
I can see this - the final two lines almost breathe his essence. Wonderful.
Those last two lines are just perfect!
Yes, I like that idea of a "rowdy silence"!
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