RWP#112....prompt..something inspired by wallpaper.....my bedroom as a kid.
ROOM OF DREAMS
It was a sanctuary
the walls were special
plastered with baseball cards
the whiz kids playing pepper
a catcher in the grass
the splendid splinter swinging his bat
where the real world was a diamond
my room of dreams
lying on my bed every night
staring, dreaming
at the bums of Flatbush roosting
Newk, Duke, Campy
Jackie dancing some jitterbug number
before stealing second base
always the centre of the diamond
my wall of dreams
with the moon sliding through the shades
staring at those cards
I became that gangling black kid from Mobile
Hank hammerin another out of the park
Willie making another basket catch
a kid from Spavinaw called Mick
doing it all
in my room of dreams
unable to pull up the covers or sleep
summer always in my bones
playing suburban stickball
where the season is forever
travelling with suitcase Simpson and Satchel
I became Minnie Minoso
and all those cards on the wall
my world of dreams.
18 comments:
Nice one, Wayne. I had to look up Minnie. Wow.
I had to Google Minnie too. Quite a career!
I love the lines:
travelling with suitcase Simpson and Satchel
I became Minnie Minoso
I also love the way the wall "papered" with baseball cards combines history and imagination in a way that brings man a young person to life. Great stuff, Wayne!
A great feel to this. The sensations and history that make a life.
I loved your nostalgic piece, Wayne...one of the VERY few this week that left me with a positive feeling! Very sweet..(I'm sure you HATE that!) ha
Jackie dancing some jitterbug number/ before stealing second base
It just made me feel the nostalgia of base ball.
Ahh! Wayne you do have a way with words. I don't know but maybe two of those baseball players. I enjoyed reading it. Nice job!
Pamela
I was a big baseball geek when I was a kid (and knew all of the references here), so I could very much relate to this one. It captures the rhythm of the game and its eternal quality. I love the line "with the moon sliding through the shades".
Wow...love your room! Lost a shoebox full of old cards back in '78, still upset!
A wonderful room of dreams -
Fantastic. Made me feel like I was in the room with you!
Oh, boy, Wayne, all those cards and great stars. Remember Wiliy's catch against Cleveland in the World Series? I can see your room--a wall of wonder. My man was Stan. Hit .511 at Ebbetts.
Stan "the man" Musial...what a sweet hitter..between the man and the splinter...the 2 best....54 series and Willie's catch on Vic Wertz...how can I ever forget....i was a huge HUGE Indians fan...they have never recovered from that...and before that trading Minnie to WSox...was bhorrible too...dam now Im reliving those days....cheers
Thank you for taking us
where the real world was a diamond
and sharing the sanctuary. And I love that your wallpaper was something you created.
I like to hear childhood memories from a male perspective. My brother and I played baseball every chance we had, every day in summer. I could play as any of the boys. You had baseball cards and I had Elvis and Ricky Nelson posters!
fun poem...sounds like my sons room...
Wow...I really like that.
Right there with you with the poster and dreams and all. WOW.
Good job.
hugs
shakira
very very good poem felt the motions I think you were conveing
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