RWP#109 using some of the words (in BOLD)
WALKING THE RIO PECOS
Walking along the Rio Pecos
with some shaman poet
our bodies reverbrating
to the drummed earth below
enthusiasts for the words of truth
unknown pagans asking questions
from the ghost riders
and the black shouldered ravens
that fly in the energy washed skies
moving to the mysteries
of the fertile celestial world
with the guilded monuments of marble
and simple stones
gargling froth from our lungs
corrupted with mescaline
drunk on water and sundered hearts
searching for chaos of the mind
from some Krishna volcano
that surrendered open
listening to buddhist monks
playing jazz with Coltrane
under sundered skies of the Mescalero
walking
walking
along the Rio Pecos.
13 comments:
This was so very lively and descriptive.
Great job getting the words in. I really got a good sense of both actual terrain and human scene, and as usual you had great allusions and flow.
I liked this poem with its quest for the truth from the black shouldered ravens.Great imagery.Walking Walking reminds of that Grace Jones song.Good one!
PS
Love that picture of you and Vreni.You are such a snappy dresser Wayne...way too cool!
Damn. I love this entire poem, and I see you carried your ravens over from last week's poem :). My favourite passage has to be "corrupted with mescaline/drunk on water and sundered hearts/searching for chaos of the mind/from some Krishna volcano/"that surrendered open."
I'm always looking for chaos of the mind. I think it's like a tightrope. You just have to know how to walk it.
I wonder who your shaman poet friend is.
Well done. I'm glad I stopped by to read.
-Nicole
I can really feel of the times and the situation of these walkers through your excellent choice of images. Great poem!
"Listening to Buddhist's monks playing jazz with Coltrane" I love that line. Really cool!
Pamela
lovely, lovely! wonderful title and images here -- I especially love the "black-shouldered ravens." thanks for this one!
~angie
Hi Wayne,
Those "black shouldered ravens" are a hit! And I also love "the guilded monuments of marble/and simple stones".
A delight to read and contemplate!
Ohh, I really like the rhythm in this piece - lovely music and imagery. 'searching for chaos of the mind'.. I mean who admits to that.. lol! Love the authenticity of it and it's powers of enlightenment. Fabulous!
I liked the rhythmic walking, walking and how it circles back. Great use of the words!
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