Old beatnik poet have you gone too far?
travelling to the mystic stars
with the flight of your soul
in the backseat of your vintage car
or burning on the docks at Veracruz
with the sacks of coco
smelling like the celestial burn
trying to win but always lose
mad with your solitude and foe
in collision with the lonely planet
stalled in the broken elevator
that would never go
dreaming of the bat with no head
sometimes your open
other times your closed
still sipping wine without the bread
Thursday, May 21, 2009
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11 comments:
this has some kind of ephemeral effect on me, something below what I can explain, perhaps its the words you used. I like it.
Wayne, you quirky beatnik. Thanks for the words. You Waynise everything.
What a start and what en ending. Loved it!
"with the sacks of coco
smelling like celestial burn'
Gorgeous image.
Great response to the initial question.
Thanks everyone
I especially love the last stanza!
Shades of Omar Kiam, "Old Beatnik". Cool man! Well done.
Love reading your pieces, so I have given you a blog award - details are on my blog.
THANKS Annie
this was amazing! the words you used just made it so... i don't know... indescribable. in a good way, of course.
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