my original poetry
Powerful and excellent words for the image.
Wayne- I really like this:he reached out for himselfbeyond his rose covered bedwith two hands of rejectionholding his red dream... and what an unexpected ending!
dang...love the intensity in this...ugh...i think poets run a great risk as we expose ourselves raw often to capture the emotion...and for some it is too much...
Powerful...I love "holding his red dream"...nice write Wayne...
wow...love that you bring that bolshevik dream in...and..the revolutionary poet shot himselfwith his gun holding his dream...tight and powerfully written
holding his red dream.Pow.=)
Yes Wayne, I guess the more committed we are to a dream the more unbearable it is to wake up!
quite niceand texturedred...why yes
I especially like the first verse! Thanks for visiting.
Powerful and beautiful.
with two hands of rejectionholding his red dream..and with his gun holding his dream...my fav lines.... thank you
This reminded me of a visit I had with our Russian exchange student.rel
What a tumultuous life he led. I like your interpretation of him and ofyskthe prompt. I didn't know anything of Mayakovsky so thank you for making me go and find out about him.
Yes, powerful write. I have to agree with Stafford. I'm glad I read this.
Rejection is hard to face ... you wrote about it so well.
This is excellent verse. Real life fantasy!
Hard raw reality indeed - uniquely constructed.
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