my original poetry
I enjoyed reading this Wayne. Striped lips are quite dramatic--I wonder if this is becoming a style somewhere--as the first poem I read for this challenge was about striped ears!
Ha this made me laugh. So you are dreaming of candy striped kisses...oh well you are an artist!:)
I am not sure about these striped lips, but I certainly enjoyed your poem!
Now this is original!
the stripe barriers are barred windows of flavouranise perhaps =)
Great words, as always.
Nice imaginary kiss!
Love the part about the invisible barriers, Wayne...builds that anticipation...longing. Well done!
mmm....candy kisses would not be a bad thing at all....
Candy kisses from a life sized candy doll! Very nice / sweet.
Nice. I think one could be hypnotizedby those lips -Thanks for your visit.
the window closes, dreaming about... candy kisses... Sounds like the kissing hasn't overcome the barriers yet... Liked this much.
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