my original poetry
NICE....got a little rain last night...was a nice cut in the heat...my version would be:brown & brittle,the tender rainsnapped the dry branchesoff at the base
I like the last line especially: "before leaving with winter."
Just a day or two after the solstice a relative reminded me that the days were once again getting shorter...I enjoyed your tanka mine is here:http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/07/wwp-112-tanka-july-4.html
Dear Wayne: A very creative way with words, and the flow is perfect. Loves how this mystic's inner journey dreams of Persia. Does conjure many images; thank-you~!!!
Some very descriptive phrases here, but to lose the imagination of death - it doesn’t bear thinking about!
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