tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post1875048121781013593..comments2023-11-03T01:56:45.922-07:00Comments on poga poetry: GROWINGWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-42127497483583128702012-07-17T02:13:23.566-07:002012-07-17T02:13:23.566-07:00Some very descriptive phrases here, but to lose th...Some very descriptive phrases here, but to lose the imagination of death - it doesn’t bear thinking about!Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-33563569065139035922012-07-16T16:13:54.971-07:002012-07-16T16:13:54.971-07:00Dear Wayne: A very creative way with words, and t...Dear Wayne: A very creative way with words, and the flow is perfect. Loves how this mystic's inner journey dreams of Persia. Does conjure many images; thank-you~!!!chiccorealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-29994730847744956482012-07-06T07:54:59.164-07:002012-07-06T07:54:59.164-07:00Just a day or two after the solstice a relative re...Just a day or two after the solstice a relative reminded me that the days were once again getting shorter...<br />I enjoyed your tanka mine is here:<br />http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/07/wwp-112-tanka-july-4.htmlJuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-37371403941799898212012-07-05T10:03:17.128-07:002012-07-05T10:03:17.128-07:00I like the last line especially: "before leav...I like the last line especially: "before leaving with winter."Carol Steel https://www.blogger.com/profile/01331628292567383426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-61022714324045772492012-07-04T03:40:10.801-07:002012-07-04T03:40:10.801-07:00NICE....got a little rain last night...was a nice ...NICE....got a little rain last night...was a nice cut in the heat...my version would be:<br /><br />brown & brittle,<br />the tender rain<br />snapped the dry branches<br />off at the baseBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com