Friday, July 17, 2009

SANGUINE SUN.........painting by Wayne


Read Write Poem #83....prompt words used in red
(draft)


SANGUINE SUN

Sacred arches
etched in the sky
revival of promises
lost under stillness
cries of gallows that hang
that slump
concealed inside the vault
communion softly spoken
compassion has no fault
as the flaming fur
burning hair
lost hearts
will loiter beneath the graves
speaking in tongues
attending the seances
where the corrupt shall lie
akin an echo of a forgotten plan
and calmness departs into reflection
with an acuity of touch
holding the righteous chalice
hampered inside invocations
of bloodstained knowledge
where honor flows
taking the stolen stillness
of death
as only in living will sacred arches know
were selfish faith
below sanguine suns are saved.

10 comments:

C. R. Stone said...

Awesome write and I love the way you've ended!

Radio Nowhere said...

Love the flow and rhythm

DaveJarecki.com said...

Could really feel this poem, Wayne, and reading it made me want to hear you read it, trying to imagine your annunciation, pauses, etc. Thank you for writing this.


Dave

Irene Toh said...

Wayne, a brilliant contemplation of faith and dying.

Jeeves said...

Nice one

Lawrence Gladeview said...

wayne a delicate find this morning, painting included. the sharpness of your horizons draw the eye in, and almost remained fixated on the texture. the words that follow are wonderful. enjoyed this morning.
-lawrence

Derrick said...

Hello Wayne,

Thanks for visiting. Your words seem to echo down the centuries; a neverending cycle.

Jenn Jilks said...

I love that word, sanguine! Not totally feeling it myself...as you have read on My Muskoka, but there ya go.

Nice job. Glad you're keeping up the writing.

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