Sunday, March 17, 2013



there is a struggle going on
in some distant land
a place where good and evil
take the final stand
the evil fight for their cause
with their dark forces
but the raven has the power
of the last flight

as the horns surface
from below hell
will they crush the good?
only the future will know
or will the raven triumph evil?
before taking up in flight
will light break through the dark?
you decide


Brian Miller said...

ah we could only hope it all went on in a distant the battle is here and does come down to our decisions...

Kathe W. said...

I had a bit of a different take on this- however you are correct- it is up to us!

anthonynorth said...

Attitude is always up to us, i think. Excellent musings in this.

Berowne said...

Smart, apt and inventive...

Jinksy said...

Dark words for a picture infused with light...

izzy said...

A raven! what a choice- the struggle for sure! I enjoyed your writing, thanks.

I didn't pick out the trample until after-( I guess my eyes aren't what they used to be!)

The Write Girl said...

Great struggle in this final battle. Fantastic poem here!

Lyn said...

Well done...the everlasting question..who wins? The good guys..yes!!

Little Nell said...

I guess it's in our hands, but there will always be struggles. Well done.

Helena said...

A struggle indeed. (I have daily ones!)

Tess Kincaid said...

Quoth the Raven...nevermore...

Jules said...

I read a children's story once where the raven was the hero. We should hope the same is true here.

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