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Breathtaking picture and amazn picture.
opps meant amazn poem
I like the way you bring the dunes in at the last line -- gives everything a concrete focus.
this was so well written. i love the part "is everything changing, as i bend down to touch the wind?" that paired with the last line makes it seem almost otherworldly. Good job!
Change... excellent topic.Nothing endures but change.--HaraclitusIf anything is certain, it is that change is certain. The world we are planning for today will not exist in this form tomorrow.--Philip Crosby, Reflections on Quality
Sand dunes make an apt analogy for the human perspective, the individual way of thinking/'seeing'/'not-seeing.' ;) Thanks for sharing. Been reading other poems here, as well. "Three Artists" blew me away, with its rich details (laid out in a fluid way). I also loved "It Comes to This" (word choice and phrasing). Cheers.
i love this! so simple and so powerful.
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