my original poetry
i am glad he found little joysbecause there is bittersweat feel the the room...a loneliness...think you dropped a t in (t)he room next door
Poignant , Wayne , seems he may have ended up Rich after all.......
Dancing with flamingos and singing with angels...this is quite touching and most definitely bittersweet.
Such a deep sense of place and his woes so easily spared with simple pleasures! I like his sense of talking with his poems over people.
The flamingos an unexpected touch...but adds so much...well done Wayne...
I really liked this and sorry I missed it last week!
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