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I really like the repetition and circling ...Wayne,<br /><br />I really like the repetition and circling back in this (the words 'about', and limousine, and eventually Kuniak). The poem sets up a kind of slowly revealed (though never quite revealed)news-story with all the sordid or colorful details and the repetition gives it a sense of urgency and of being "in the moment," the way news, or a situation in which one is personally involved tends to unfold.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-70291678311157038462009-10-23T13:54:34.351-07:002009-10-23T13:54:34.351-07:00I like what you did with the prompt idea..it was f...I like what you did with the prompt idea..it was fun, interesting and actually readable! Kind of a beatnik feeling...Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-155744071282445362009-10-23T13:42:49.276-07:002009-10-23T13:42:49.276-07:00A difficult prompt this week but very well put tog...A difficult prompt this week but very well put together. Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com