tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post822502524197911145..comments2023-11-03T01:56:45.922-07:00Comments on poga poetry: RECLUSEWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-7400110408640909002013-10-21T03:34:17.381-07:002013-10-21T03:34:17.381-07:00This is an outstanding poem. I didn't at all t...This is an outstanding poem. I didn't at all think of it as a retired person; just as a recluse. I suppose being a recluse is much easier if you have a pension--and the problem of "what will come next" could be thought of as death for a retiree. <br /><br />Here's what I like about this poem: It has rhythm of thoughts. It has excellent imagery (far better than I can come up with). It uses language well, without torturing it. It is a bit ambiguous, but is not one of those amorphous masses of twisted words that mean nothing and everything. Besides all that, it is a poignant portrait of too many people. <br />Jim Swindlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632113399696237695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-20311155757678969312013-09-06T08:25:12.006-07:002013-09-06T08:25:12.006-07:00Interesting and I especially like
she likes nothin...Interesting and I especially like<br />she likes nothing more than a sip of tea-so she can forget the dizzy race<br />and search for the stars in the sky<br />instead of watching old movies <br /><br />for me retirement is very under rated.....I enjoy it and have fun dong new things! Have a happy day!Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-32356153657885372962013-09-06T02:52:47.610-07:002013-09-06T02:52:47.610-07:00Wonderfully written - and so very true. Life after...Wonderfully written - and so very true. Life after retirement is a real challenge for so many who have been absorbed by their work.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.com