tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post629696245651937680..comments2023-11-03T01:56:45.922-07:00Comments on poga poetry: CITY LIGHTSWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-33803021863896351452012-03-15T11:46:44.268-07:002012-03-15T11:46:44.268-07:00Glad she found that door and discovered the truth....Glad she found that door and discovered the truth.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-31104998074707785272012-03-13T11:48:52.946-07:002012-03-13T11:48:52.946-07:00I especially like "uncomfortable with midnigh...I especially like "uncomfortable with midnight at high noon"...nice write Wayne...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-23212271242218839782012-03-13T07:43:50.603-07:002012-03-13T07:43:50.603-07:00I like the positive ending-discarding old thoughts...I like the positive ending-discarding old thoughts and moving forwardKathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-6542184198792358352012-03-12T22:48:37.544-07:002012-03-12T22:48:37.544-07:00I like this very much...some of your word choices ...I like this very much...some of your word choices evoke images that seem familiar to me...or too my past:) Nice. LaurelLaurel's Quillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11992961037629400452noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-29094006644631393882012-03-12T19:37:27.038-07:002012-03-12T19:37:27.038-07:00Yes, must she stay on! There's so much to savo...Yes, must she stay on! There's so much to savor out there, which she finally did! Great verse Wayne!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-557125357791580312012-03-12T19:22:41.144-07:002012-03-12T19:22:41.144-07:00smiles...i def like the turn at the end..in findin...smiles...i def like the turn at the end..in finding herself and then her voice...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-42113887292331899722012-03-12T15:08:10.892-07:002012-03-12T15:08:10.892-07:00'uncomfortable with midnight at high noon'...'uncomfortable with midnight at high noon' .. great line!! :)Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-45142265432422524142012-03-12T14:45:03.789-07:002012-03-12T14:45:03.789-07:00very nice! A goodly home is to find a place to rea...very nice! A goodly home is to find a place to read your poems...<br />:)Merlyn Mischiefhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386212091982241905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-64788818214787258512012-03-12T14:30:47.411-07:002012-03-12T14:30:47.411-07:00This is wonderful..so glad that she was rescued by...This is wonderful..so glad that she was rescued by poetry..hope springs....Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-80147565810169900982012-03-12T13:56:35.873-07:002012-03-12T13:56:35.873-07:00i really enjoyed reading your work....the end felt...i really enjoyed reading your work....the end felt she was walking into the light....guess we all trying to find that door...xKayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-89695349670501046522012-03-12T12:47:34.550-07:002012-03-12T12:47:34.550-07:00I like 'raining dust between the storms' -...I like 'raining dust between the storms' - very evocative. A poem of hope, ultimately.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.com