tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post5009526810439873102..comments2023-11-03T01:56:45.922-07:00Comments on poga poetry: SEEDY LADYWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-37201611351754600522019-07-20T04:49:56.786-07:002019-07-20T04:49:56.786-07:00br>kanchipuram silk sarees manufacturers
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Love your poem to create a beautiful painting of words.Jill Zaheerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13717823080638070928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-90029445475555095262009-12-04T12:43:50.220-08:002009-12-04T12:43:50.220-08:00I like the play on words in the title, and through...I like the play on words in the title, and throughout ("tart flavor"), how the narrator develops a relationship as witness, but at the end respects the limits of his distance.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-61571351216179160292009-12-04T10:19:55.168-08:002009-12-04T10:19:55.168-08:00crimson pulp without fiction - a fine line, among ...crimson pulp without fiction - a fine line, among many. The imagery is wonderful and the repetition makes this piece sing.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-21221678424305135372009-12-04T04:12:09.121-08:002009-12-04T04:12:09.121-08:00Pomegranates arrive here on trains from mysterious...Pomegranates arrive here on trains from mysterious places so for me the context works very well. I love your imagery and hesitancy to commit to sampling the temptation. Thank you for crafting this and taking me for a ride with the "Seedy Lady", Wayne.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-39630037957381412992009-12-03T21:30:32.474-08:002009-12-03T21:30:32.474-08:00Even I like herEven I like herJeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-58757041686174855622009-12-03T19:21:29.687-08:002009-12-03T19:21:29.687-08:00It's hard not to like her, and this poem, its ...It's hard not to like her, and this poem, its imagery and the catchy rhythms.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-67400783701141334372009-12-03T18:36:07.630-08:002009-12-03T18:36:07.630-08:00She sounds so mysterious! And who doesn't love...She sounds so mysterious! And who doesn't love a train in the mix.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-68438179231043856662009-12-03T16:18:15.300-08:002009-12-03T16:18:15.300-08:00Nice work. The treatment of the pomegranate was go...Nice work. The treatment of the pomegranate was good, in general, but I was especially drawn in by the unexpected (and cleverly described) setting. Well done!Randy Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07085663477230000441noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-23754127129114560962009-12-03T14:47:00.752-08:002009-12-03T14:47:00.752-08:00I like the feeling of the orient express train and...I like the feeling of the orient express train and the pomegranate being synonymous with the mysterious woman that you fancy.rallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-83895831968928875492009-12-03T13:05:10.675-08:002009-12-03T13:05:10.675-08:00I love the play on words in "crimson pulp wit...I love the play on words in "crimson pulp without fiction" as well as the sentiment of not knowing her but liking her. Really enjoyed it.James Brushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08401606367969855802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-54891936592445563722009-12-03T12:43:11.552-08:002009-12-03T12:43:11.552-08:00like some lost child in exhile
beside a huge mache...<i>like some lost child in exhile<br />beside a huge machette knife<br />shining<br />tring to escape death from the underworld</i><br /><br />Persephone as the pomegranate. What a delightful interpretation! And such atmosphere on the Siberian train...Paul Oakleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-29322216177728489052009-12-03T12:04:47.494-08:002009-12-03T12:04:47.494-08:00Yeah, who wouldn't like her?
The dining car an...Yeah, who wouldn't like her?<br />The dining car and poker especially.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-42857382512044381412009-12-03T11:31:06.268-08:002009-12-03T11:31:06.268-08:00Your poetry consistantly betrays your adventurous ...Your poetry consistantly betrays your adventurous side. Wayne believe you are a secret agent man at heart. I enjoy the journey in your poetry. In this poem I am still choking on the nausiating Russian cigarettes. Thanks for the trip. By the way, I liked her too. Babuska darlin'.<br />Regards,<br />DHAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-84366666468042838002009-12-03T10:36:10.177-08:002009-12-03T10:36:10.177-08:00And I liked the treatment here. Great imagery.And I liked the treatment here. Great imagery.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com