tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post4210936626481946677..comments2023-11-03T01:56:45.922-07:00Comments on poga poetry: PRAIRIE TRAINWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-45182544856033721662016-06-07T21:46:36.763-07:002016-06-07T21:46:36.763-07:00MUST HAVE BEEN WHEN YOU WERE ON YOUR WAY TO INDIAN...MUST HAVE BEEN WHEN YOU WERE ON YOUR WAY TO INDIAN HEAD, WHEN YU WERE A BOY, AND YOU DREAMED OF SACHEL PAIGE AS THE WAITER. PAULpaulkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03841203805065028401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-76352410500299756682013-10-21T02:55:51.252-07:002013-10-21T02:55:51.252-07:00You have quite a way with words. This reminds me o...You have quite a way with words. This reminds me of my ride across the prairie on a train as a child and later as a teen, at about the same time portrayed in Rockwell's painting. I didn't see any scythes, but remember the dirty windows, the stern conductors, the moss in the water jug, and the good turkey sandwich that cost the unheard-of high price of $4.00 or so. Jim Swindlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632113399696237695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-79612957965407731992013-09-11T11:12:22.648-07:002013-09-11T11:12:22.648-07:00No, I did not see that ending coming.No, I did not see that ending coming.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349087080262856079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-19579665914801825292013-09-10T11:58:19.837-07:002013-09-10T11:58:19.837-07:00Now I want to know why, when everything went so sm...Now I want to know why, when everything went so smoothly up to the last moment . . . . Frikohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04277167831642088694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-57874952476025996012013-09-10T09:24:17.060-07:002013-09-10T09:24:17.060-07:00Wayne, this is a beautiful, beautiful write!Wayne, this is a beautiful, beautiful write!Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-28354687543959712052013-09-10T05:33:02.436-07:002013-09-10T05:33:02.436-07:00You're not safe anywhere these days . . . ;-)
...You're not safe anywhere these days . . . ;-)<br /><br />I enjoyed the journey.jabbloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-79144723403389142142013-09-09T19:18:32.783-07:002013-09-09T19:18:32.783-07:00This is different ~~ and I really enjoyed it.This is different ~~ and I really enjoyed it.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-47341813473929185822013-09-09T12:08:46.589-07:002013-09-09T12:08:46.589-07:00There's lovely imagery in this poem, Wayne, an...There's lovely imagery in this poem, Wayne, and the ending was a surprise.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16308322887557661274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-27617696640523109362013-09-09T11:45:14.082-07:002013-09-09T11:45:14.082-07:00oh my- I did not see that coming.oh my- I did not see that coming.Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-53247974806330697742013-09-09T09:02:02.961-07:002013-09-09T09:02:02.961-07:00oh dear, i was loving this until the 'Suddenly...oh dear, i was loving this until the 'Suddenly...' but of course, even on the prairies bad things can happen ;) -<br />love the exalted horizon against the plainsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com