tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post211632132898000718..comments2023-11-03T01:56:45.922-07:00Comments on poga poetry: DESERT PHONE BOOTHWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-40643500913351318802012-02-23T11:05:38.433-08:002012-02-23T11:05:38.433-08:00Really love the rhythm you created in this poem. L...Really love the rhythm you created in this poem. Love how it opens too - very evocative description of the place. I felt like I was there in the Black Rock Desert.<br /><br />http://emilygyoung.com/theessentialemilyEmily Younghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00910909957287801554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-40015397834107086042012-02-22T09:12:46.344-08:002012-02-22T09:12:46.344-08:00Very interesting. I'd hate to cough 500 times...Very interesting. I'd hate to cough 500 times.~T~https://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-38410555876060336972012-02-22T03:25:22.101-08:002012-02-22T03:25:22.101-08:00Oh, I do so like this! Superb surrealism.Oh, I do so like this! Superb surrealism.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-36961647696008927702012-02-21T15:12:32.763-08:002012-02-21T15:12:32.763-08:00Nice...
JJRod'zNice... <br /><br />JJRod'zJJ Roa Rodriguezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501127870785148555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-31480524580920987992012-02-21T12:45:45.193-08:002012-02-21T12:45:45.193-08:00Wow! I love the references to the Burning Man. (I ...Wow! I love the references to the Burning Man. (I can't help, but think of "The Wicker Man" when I read that though.)<br /><br />Nice piece!Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-30039896963920713652012-02-21T07:05:31.836-08:002012-02-21T07:05:31.836-08:00I never let the phone ring more than 400 times. I...I never let the phone ring more than 400 times. I'm funny that way. I'm not quite sure how to unpack this one...there's a lot in those few lines. I think I need ponder this a bit longer.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-8212284330827804112012-02-21T04:31:31.764-08:002012-02-21T04:31:31.764-08:00Nice! Interesting play; love the desert and echoes...Nice! Interesting play; love the desert and echoes- He isn't moving very fast if he time for all that listening! thanks.izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-8150523025599957602012-02-21T01:55:51.903-08:002012-02-21T01:55:51.903-08:00Intriguing response to the prompt, nice one.Intriguing response to the prompt, nice one.Brigid O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08646687391409208367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-83880885842299069492012-02-21T01:51:12.434-08:002012-02-21T01:51:12.434-08:00500?
At least it's an even number.
rel500?<br />At least it's an even number.<br />relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-31798005144105800482012-02-20T20:01:35.186-08:002012-02-20T20:01:35.186-08:00a bit of a surreal feel to this wayne...def the 50...a bit of a surreal feel to this wayne...def the 500 rings and 500 coughs...i think it would be interesting to be at burning man though...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7693965280291750521.post-39364881231948141152012-02-20T19:10:47.859-08:002012-02-20T19:10:47.859-08:00Eerie... I like the repitition of five hundred tim...Eerie... I like the repitition of five hundred times, it shows impatience.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.com